Wednesday 3 July 2019

2019 The Three Toed Sloth

We had to watch a You Tube clip and chose one and I chose the three toed sloth and we had to write a story about it.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Violet
    Well done for writing six sloth facts. Maybe next time you could add a picture. Whats your favourite thing about Sloths. Well done.

    From Blair

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  2. Kia Ora, It's Shzstela and Amber. We think you did an awesome creative poster about sloths. We also think you have great describing words about the 3 toed sloth. But we think you should work more on your sentence structure and also show some pictures.

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