Friday 12 June 2020

2020 Fungi Hunt

We went for a hunt around our school to photograph all the different fungi we could find. We had to choose one photo to bass our writing around. We did slow writing, where we had to follow a set of sentence structures.
Can you spot my metaphor in my writing??

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  1. Anonymous22 June 2020 at 14:02

    Kia ora Violet!
    I love your slow writing and I think lots of us could agree that you did a great job writing this. I also like the way you made it so descriptive.
    My feed forward for you is to maybe next time you could add more to the wood dweller sentence so that it would make more sense.

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